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         throughout this course.
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       <p>
-        the norm within the toki pona community is to normally separate
-        sentences with a full stop except for when there's a <i>ni</i> referring
-        to an idea in the next sentence, where a colon is often used instead.
+        usually, it's very common to separate
+        sentences with a full stop. when there's a <i>ni</i> referring
+        to an idea in the next sentence, a colon is often used instead.
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